Kia Ora Gina. Thanks for this great storyboard about Egypt. You found some great supporting pictures and summarised the information in your own words well. The one about people being at the death of the pharaoh could be rewritten more formally though! Remember to comment on your work (purple paragraph) about what you did, how you found it, what you learnt and ask a question. Keep up the great work, Gina.
Hey Gina, your BFF Sarah here, OMG girlfriend I, really like what you did there, I think you must have put lots of work on it. 🤓😉🤩🤪BB4N GTR<3 <3 :O :-P
Kia Ora Gina. Thanks for this great storyboard about Egypt. You found some great supporting pictures and summarised the information in your own words well. The one about people being at the death of the pharaoh could be rewritten more formally though!
ReplyDeleteRemember to comment on your work (purple paragraph) about what you did, how you found it, what you learnt and ask a question. Keep up the great work, Gina.
Hey Gina, your BFF Sarah here, OMG girlfriend I, really like what you did there, I think you must have put lots of work on it. 🤓😉🤩🤪BB4N GTR<3 <3 :O :-P
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