Show Not Tell
Kate was shocked.
Kate's mouth opened like a full moon.
She froze in here tracks of shock.
Tommy was exited.
Tommy was exited.
Tommy's smile was huge as a banana
He would not stop jumping
He felt sad.
His eye's were full of tears.
He sat down in a corner to weep.
She was in love.
Her eye's looked dreamily at her love.
She was hypnotized by his charming smile.
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